Author Archives: freckles

About freckles

I'm a redheaded Welsh lass from Wales - Great Britian. The past nearly 10 yrs I have lived in the US and at the moment live in Wisconsin while my hubby is getting his masters. Me, I am trying to finish my 1st draft of a novel while running around after my 4yr old and 2 yr old as well as doing this course :) I love cooking, writing. Crafts, movies and music. I have 7 children & 2 granddaughters!! I know I look too young - Well, I am lol (well not quite 18 yrs old..anymore lol)

Thank You

I just wanted to let all you guys and dolls who are doing this Mastering Dialogue Class,  that I appreciate all your wonderful feedback, encouraging words of advice and critiques too 🙂 They have helped me push myself a little … Continue reading

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Lesson 7 – Trust Me.

I went for something different this time around, I hope you enjoy this little tale as much as I had writing it. It reminds me of the stories I had read to me as a child and the places I visited … Continue reading

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Lesson 6 – London’s Calling (redone)

I hope you give me a second chance and read my redone 2nd post for Lesson 6. After some great feedback and my nagging thoughts about how I should of done better. I sat down and re-worked my post. Again, I’d … Continue reading

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Lesson 6 — London’s Calling.

I’m not sure if I’ve captured the requirements for lesson 6’s homework. Here were the requirements: Character 1 has a difficult relationship with his/her parents.  Now Character 1 has to inform his/her parents about a decision that they won’t approve of. … Continue reading

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Lesson 5 – Worth it?

Um… So, this homework assignment and I, didn’t quite get along LOL. I truly found writing this piece a little frustrating. Not that I couldn’t do it, but rather, I felt it a little hard not, showing through dialogue or narration … Continue reading

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Lesson 4 – Misconception

All comments and critique are welcome 🙂 Sorry if it feels too long, I kept writing until, it felt right on where I should end it. ********* “Good Evening Sir, what would you like to drink?” The neatly dressed waiter asked. “Good … Continue reading

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Lesson 3 — Life Changes

So, here we are, Lesson 3 already. How time flies when you’re enjoying the whole writing process! (As, I grab yet another piece of chocolate, sigh) Lol Now, I wanted to set the scene on this one, so it’s a … Continue reading

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Lesson 2

I didn’t know whether or not to re-write my first lesson post, so I chose to do a different dialogue. This is quite shorter than my first post and very different. I didn’t do much summary for this, as I’m guessing lesson … Continue reading

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Lesson 1- First Impressions

Lesson 1. Your feedback and critique is welcomed 🙂  “Beautiful day, isn’t it, ma’am?” Cassy turned her head to see a bright faced young girl standing by her, “It is… a beautiful day.” she answered. “So, what will it be… … Continue reading

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Hi Everyone

Well, this is my 4th class from the Creative Writing Courses and I’m very excited to get started 🙂 I look forward to reading everyone else’s work too.

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